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Revenge (redux)

Revenge (redux)

3D Modelling 3D Modelling \ Still life | 03/05/04 @757 | marcia | Comments critiques (19) | Views views (2318)


Revenge (redux)
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Got some valuable critiques of the original image (Revenge) from here and various other places, which resulted in a complete rework of the scene.

Thanks to those who helped!
 
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Avatar Mila-22

 03/05/04 @759

wow! really nice!
 
Avatar Kalininskiy

 03/05/04 @773


Excellently!

+7/7
 
Avatar amoeba

 03/05/04 @874

Wow, so many great details! Good decision on the texture and colour. Great combosition and the lighting is much more dramatic than Revenge. I love these mysterious long shadows, and the little spider's a nice touch... like a silent witness of the event.

The only thing is that some of the bump maps used on various places are a bit profound and make the picture looks a bit busy. Also maybe a little more specularity can be used on the knife and pins on the doll, since right now the specular light on these glass sirfaces are drawing away the attention.... Just my own opinions. We'll never know if these suggestions work unless do some experiments and compare the results.

Overall it's a great concept and executed nicely. Really impressive work. +9 from me :)
 
marcia

 03/05/04 @896

Thanks for your comments, peoples.

Amoeba, You're not the only one who's made that observation. The problem is, the noise is fractal noise, dust, from aging the scene, which would naturally occur over time. Compare it to the original, which had no dust at all. I wonder if I can get away with removing the dust from the papers so they can be read without making the aging look inconsistent. And I agree with you about critiques; I've incorporated a lot of people's suggestions into this version which--I believe--has improved it a lot. Thanks for your input; I really do appreciate it. :)
 
Avatar gama

 03/05/04 @977

wow. ia can't see nothing wrong in this pic...its wonderful, one of the best 3d models i've seen here...original,unusual,...i really like this image...what a creativity...millions of interpretations behind this scene...Its incredible that you isnt a elite member!!! ;) my maximum score!
 
Avatar SeraFin

 03/06/04 @045

i'm not much for 3d but this is really great
 
Avatar waska

 03/06/04 @716

this is a much better version!
 
Avatar Ikaa

 03/06/04 @769

Wonderful picture. Wonderful colors and textures. Great work.
 
ant-

 03/06/04 @776

i love the blood stained heart, very creative :) any chance of a closer look at this one? i like the composition better than revenge, I have just noticed it actually fits in to the golden ratio quite nicely, you can draw a spiral the sweeps through many of the features ending up nicly in the dolls head, which is probebly why my eye is so well guided round the image +5 from me
 
Avatar amongfaeries

 03/07/04 @239

wow....i like this one a lot better than the other. it's darker and more dramatic. great job at revamping it. the other one looked like a childrens horror scene, this one is more adult...with a doll :) great job
 
Avatar dawntrip

 03/08/04 @360

I like this one much more than the first one.
The mood in it, is really well transcribed, and the mappings are fine.
If you can try to re-model the doll as an old bited-by-dog one, it should make a greater image, much more complete, with a real unity in it.
Great job, girl. +4/5
 
shadowhead

 03/10/04 @324

nice,like ant- i'd like to explore the scene a little more .stuff like the thumb print on the glass in" revenge" excite me. i've seen a lot of technically gifted work on this site( as is your work) but you have the soul of an artist. those of you who haven't checked out marcia 's other work really should!!!!!!!
 
Blinc1

 03/11/04 @400

The changes you have made vere preetty nice
 
Nex

 03/13/04 @534

awesome.. I love it
 
Avatar ThruMyEyez

 03/13/04 @975

This is really great, great textures, a wonderful expression of the theme.
 
Avatar synth3tic

 03/31/04 @799

very well done, I love how this one is darker than the first, love your work +9
 
Virginiajoe

 04/12/04 @691

Nice colors and textures. Great work. ;)
 
Unknown visitor

 05/01/04 @607

amazing work, wow! nice details and concept! full markS
 
Avatar mal-callm

 12/12/04 @797

There's nothing to complain about. Perfect.
 
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